Thanks! I think the additions are mainly going to be flashbacks to establish the emotional relationships between the characters so people understand what's going on. I got lazy with those on the first draft.

There isn't that much out there as far as Hollywood is concerned. I wonder what smaller films there are out now, but of course since I'm at the edge of the middle of nowhere, they don't put those films in the theatres, which is frustrating. TV is better, anyway. And longer. :)