Oh my god, you wrote it! And it's...it's great! I don't even...I have no idea where it's going, but I'm sure wherever it is, it'll be amazing, because it already is.
He likes this voice. It’s a joyful voice, sodden in worry and merciless doubt at the moment, but Steve can taste the warm comfort cocooned inside.
Oh. Oh, Sam's everything really is like that.
Sam’s heart squeezed in his chest, growing light as every drop of tension and ill will drained from his body, and he felt peace. Pure, loving peace swelled in his soul, sweeping away all fear, doubt and anger.
And a look into that Steve's eyes probably would do that to you.
You captured both of them so perfectly, especially all of Sam's mental freakouts about whether Steve is a soul or a demon or an angel or what. Awesome.
ETA: And it's occurred to me that I might have some idea of where this is going, and am now even more excited.
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Date: 2009-05-29 06:35 am (UTC)He likes this voice. It’s a joyful voice, sodden in worry and merciless doubt at the moment, but Steve can taste the warm comfort cocooned inside.
Oh. Oh, Sam's everything really is like that.
Sam’s heart squeezed in his chest, growing light as every drop of tension and ill will drained from his body, and he felt peace. Pure, loving peace swelled in his soul, sweeping away all fear, doubt and anger.
And a look into that Steve's eyes probably would do that to you.
You captured both of them so perfectly, especially all of Sam's mental freakouts about whether Steve is a soul or a demon or an angel or what. Awesome.
ETA: And it's occurred to me that I might have some idea of where this is going, and am now even more excited.