Summary: 100 word drabble. Adam cannot die.
Rating: PG-13
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my own words.


Adam cannot die. He's tried, out of frustration, anger, despair. He's stabbed and shot and thrown himself from the highest cliffs on the globe. He's broken bones he never knew existed, cut off limbs, watched his blood spray out in a crimson arc until he collapses to his knees and his sight grows dark. He's even managed to get himself struck by lighting, 30 million volts of white heat blasting through his petrified body. Beneath the ashes, new skin blooms, blood vessels knit themselves back into serpentine webs and his soul screams inside its inviolable cage. Adam can’t die. Ever.
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From: [identity profile] mossymermaid.livejournal.com


Wow. Very descriptive. The choppy sentances really add to the vibe of the piece.

Terrific.

From: [identity profile] gimmemypickle.livejournal.com


Beneath the ashes, new skin blooms, blood vessels knit themselves back into serpentine webs and his soul screams inside its inviolable cage.

I particularly love that part. Very poetic. :-)

From: [identity profile] bangendedscoot.livejournal.com


Very visceral, and seems to evoke sympathy for him. Nice one (:

From: [identity profile] force-oblique.livejournal.com


Wow!
Very nice!
I so love how direct and intense it!!!!
Good work!
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