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guanin ([personal profile] guanin) wrote2004-07-19 12:22 am
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I have decided to inflict these upon you

I got in the poetry mood and wrote these. They might be good, might be bad, I don't know.

No pairings are specified, although I did have the moog in mind.

When the heat wraps him in
its smothering cloak,
he casts off his shirt
seeking the breeze's welcome caress.
His back
bears the marks of last night's lovemaking.
Long red lines and pale half moons
gleam proudly on his sun bitten skin.

His lover watches him,
the sun in his smile,
fingers touching the bite on his own shoulder.

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The flower is sweetest in the morning,
kissed by moonlight,
shivering with dew.
Yet my lover's mouth is sweeter still,
kissed by the sun,
trembling with mine.

[identity profile] hannahrorlove.livejournal.com 2004-07-19 06:00 am (UTC)(link)
I like the second one more than the first - the implications are, to me, stronger than the explicitness. Both are good, it's just a matter of taste on my part. Thank you for writing.

[identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com 2004-07-19 06:27 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you. I like the second one better too, actually. The first one didn't come out quite like I wanted.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/____pavlov_lore/ 2004-07-29 11:58 pm (UTC)(link)
i saw cofresi was one of your interest. are you a related to the cofresi?

[identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com 2004-07-30 02:33 am (UTC)(link)
No, I put him there because I'm Puerto Rican and interested in pirates.

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/____pavlov_lore/ 2004-07-30 03:14 am (UTC)(link)
puerto rican here too. Roberto Cofresi is some kind of great great etc. etc. uncle of mine

[identity profile] http://users.livejournal.com/____pavlov_lore/ 2004-07-30 03:19 am (UTC)(link)
El Pirata that is