Oh, this is great! Excellent dialogue- both voices are spot-on, though I think my absolute favorite part is:
“Oi. Don’t you get cheeky on me again. You remember what happened last time.” Two hours locked inside the greenhouse with strict instructions to break out only by using his powers, and if Claude caught him throwing a rock against the glass or jimmying the lock with a hairpin, the lesson would be repeated in the cramped and smelly maintenance closet. With a solid oak chair to barricade the door.
This definitely happened, no question about it. XD
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Date: 2009-08-29 04:34 pm (UTC)“Oi. Don’t you get cheeky on me again. You remember what happened last time.”
Two hours locked inside the greenhouse with strict instructions to break out only by using his powers, and if Claude caught him throwing a rock against the glass or jimmying the lock with a hairpin, the lesson would be repeated in the cramped and smelly maintenance closet. With a solid oak chair to barricade the door.
This definitely happened, no question about it. XD