Title: Love's Sorrow
Word Count: 200
Rating: G
Summary: What possible meaning can he derive from a love that can never be returned?
Disclaimer: I own nothing but my own words.



I love you. Two words engraved in the crimson of Hiro’s heart. Two little sounds that mean everything yet at the same time nothing. What possible meaning can he derive from a love that can never be returned? He doesn’t say them, afraid to trust them even to silence of his solitude. Having them exist at all is already too much to bear.

Only once do they slip from his tongue, a faint exhalation, hardly audible even to his own ears. The moon is in her zenith and in the coldness of the grove the stars are the only witness to his sorrow.

Footsteps sound at his back. He turns, terrified to see Kensei approaching him, a questioning look on his face.

“Are you all right?”

Hiro nods, struggling to keep his breath from scattering all over the place. Kensei regards him with a slightly amused expression, perfectly curved smile glinting on his lips.

“Let’s go back to the camp, then.”

Hiro forces a smile on his face; it aches like a grimace. He shuffles past him, his head lowered, eyes desperately fixed on the ground before him. The words burn on his tongue, but he can’t say them. Ever.
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From: [identity profile] tju-tju-tju-tju.livejournal.com


Ooh, I like a lot! This pulled on my heart-strings, which is difficult to do with short pieces, so I commend you for that. Awesome job, as usual. *claps*

From: [identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com


Thank you! I'm glad to hear that. I was a little worried.

From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com


*CRIES*
Seriously, when V3 rolls around I'm gonna break the fourth wall and FORCE Hiro to dig Adam up while I dump 10th Wifey in the Marianna Trench!

From: [identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com


*pats you in the back* There, there. Kensei will realize his own undying love towards Hiro in the end.

I'll join you in your mission. If they throw a wife into the equation, I'm officially going AU.

Thank you so much for your comment!

From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com


*pats you in the back* There, there. Kensei will realize his own undying love towards Hiro in the end.
He'd BETTER! *waves katana*

I'll join you in your mission. If they throw a wife into the equation, I'm officially going AU.
I think Adam is bisexual.

Thank you so much for your comment!
Welcome!

From: [identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com


I think Adam is bisexual.

I thinks so, too, but this season has had so many senseless het love interets already, that I really can't stomach another one.

From: [identity profile] likeahobbit.livejournal.com


GAH, how did I miss this?!

Aw, Hiro. ::hugs him::

Lovely little piece, love.

From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com


I thinks so, too, but this season has had so many senseless het love interets already, that I really can't stomach another one.
I'm picturing Adam/10th Wifey as Sark/Lauren type thing ...

From: [identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com


*grins* Don't worry about it.

Thank you! I'm so happy you like it.

From: [identity profile] guanin.livejournal.com


Um, I haven't seen Alias, either. It's next on my list, I swear.

From: [identity profile] tessykins.livejournal.com


Oh, this is beautiful and painful. Excellent work.

From: [identity profile] aunt-zelda.livejournal.com


The last two seasons are awful but the first few are ok ...
Lauren was Vaughn's (Sydney's love interest) wife when Sydney reutrned after going missing for three years (I think) and Sark is this wonderfully sexy evil cute David Anders and Sark and Lauren (who's also evil) hook up.
It's DIVINE.
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